Givenchy X Cafe Paci Model, as of Week 4 Tutorial

Givenchy X Cafe Paci Model, as of Week 4 Tutorial

These images show my Givenchy X Cafe Paci Sketchup model, as of the end of our week 4 tutorial. The feedback I received was that it was too 'safe', appeared to be a shape that had been extruded and did not depict the concept of abstract space enough. 

The glass 'wave' roof reaches from the above space all the way down to the below ground space and will cut through part of the terrain to allow natural light into the below ground space. The 'above' space, which was going to serves as Givenchy's atelier and Cafe Paci's offices, will be redeveloped to become a more interesting and abstract space.

This free standing space on the lower level will remain a part of the space I have created, it ties in with the idea of being 'floaty', which was the word selected to inspire this space. This is where I intend to put Cafe Paci's workshop space.

Around the outside of the model I'm thinking of creating a netting that will enclose the space but still tie in with the word 'billowing' which was chosen to inspire the above space.